Thursday, 8 June 2017

Rivering


















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i have gone waves
shades of aqua
and the whale song
echoes through veins

 shades of aqua
and the swelling clouds
rains through the eyes
oneness of ocean, muse and self

let’s not break the spell
this is the realm
revive, bloom and river 





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22 comments:

  1. I have a huge smile after reading your poem, as if ....what? Everything is flowing with life, and sometimes the tides make the rivers rise.

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  2. Absolutely beautiful. I think the last line has entered my soul.

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  3. This is just stunning, Sreeja! I love shades of aqua and whale song and that's such good advice, to 'revive, bloom and river'.

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  4. No - don't break the beautiful blue spell it's magical

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  5. There is so much yearning in the poem hoping the ways that work are not broken. Sadly there is so much pressure to break the spell that created this beautiful world and what a loss that would be for everyone that cared. Very moving poem.

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  6. Those shades of aqua are spell bounding indeed. Well-penned.
    -HA

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  7. ...revive, bloom and river........Oh I LOVE these words in terms of being advice to save a life! Wonderful!

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  8. "...oneness of ocean, muse and self..." Just perfect!

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  9. echo of whale song... like that...

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  10. Some of my very favourite things: the colour, the flow of the river, the swell of the ocean...

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  11. I love the sensory imagery used here.. really beautiful conception of the rain.

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  12. Shades of aqua ... beautifully written.

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  13. "and the whale song
    echoes through veins"

    Fantastic!

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  14. Oh, the 'shades of aqua and whale song'...work beautifully!Loved it, Sreeja!

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  15. Whale songs in my veins... love that.

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  16. I liked the idea of not breaking the spell.

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  17. Indeed. May we add to the magic.

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  18. I feel a sense of peacefulness as I read your poem.

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  19. Thank you so much all dear poets..<3

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